What a wonderful poem, Anita! I love the simplistic power of words so many times. I’m long winded, so it always amazes me when someone can say so much in such a short space like you did. The great thing for me is that this really made me stop to read and think about it. Like, totally shifted my focus and I love that. I’m headed to read more of your poems now.
“Slime has a chime” – love this. I can certainly tell some stories to prove that….
What an interesting poem. I wonder why it was written?
What a wonderful poem, Anita! I love the simplistic power of words so many times. I’m long winded, so it always amazes me when someone can say so much in such a short space like you did. The great thing for me is that this really made me stop to read and think about it. Like, totally shifted my focus and I love that. I’m headed to read more of your poems now.
What a beautiful poem! I like your writing Anita. I love the photo too.
Love the combination between the words and the gorgeous photo. Thanks for taking me out of my left brain today. Beautiful!
Beautiful poem! It’s always interesting to observe nature and all the creatures who live peacefully in the mud.
Such a beautiful poem 🙂
I was a li’l confused when you said that slime has a chime. However, the following lines made it clear 🙂
I loved it!
What a beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing! this made me realize I don’t read poems enough. Will put them in my reading list.
what a great poem. Baggage is all apart of growing! There is no story without a beginning